Friday 24 April 2020
My Favourite Piece Of Online Learning
My favourite piece of online learning so far is writing. I love writing because I get to write interesting things and cool pictures. I can also write about my imaginations too. Even though I like writing it is a challenge because I can make mistakes. And a good writer does not check their work while writing, they check it after to make sure that they make no mistakes. I want to become a good writer so I don't make mistakes.
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Hi Zara. My name is Josie. I like how you wrote about your favourite piece of online learning. I sometimes do mistkaes but then I croos it out. Bye my bff.
ReplyDeleteI meant mistakes but then I cross it out. Bye Zara.💖
DeleteHi Zara, I'm very pleased to hear you have been enjoying your writing and using your imagination to help you create stories. I used to love writing when I was at school and my imagination would 'run wild'. I could write for hours!
ReplyDeleteWhat have you been writing about during your home learning time? Perhaps you could share a story on your blog so others can enjoy your writing.
Keep up the fabulous work and stay safe and well in your bubble.
Mingalaba Zara, thanks for sharing your favourite learning is writing! Is there anything in particular that we've done over the last three weeks that you have enjoyed? You could post about this specific piece of work and include a screenshot, or a link to the file, so that people can see what you've been doing. You are absolutely correct that writers do not get everything correct the first time around, it's like any learning - by making mistakes we develop our understanding and learn even more! I have been very impressed with your commitment to your online learning, keep up the great work :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Zara, you certainly are a talented author. It is a treat to read the stories that you share in class time. I like the way that you have recognised that authors have to work and work to perfect a piece of writing. It sure does take lots of patience. It would be wonderful for you to share another piece of your own writing with this blog post so everyone can see how talented you are too!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Hi Zara, I liked how you you said about making mistakes in your writing because real authors make mistakes in writing and then fix it in the end.
ReplyDeleteRumaisa Hi Zara i like how you explane your work
ReplyDeletehi zara and reneem and rumaisa
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