Monday, 20 April 2020

A rabbit in a pastel place

Yesterday i wore my favourite fluffy  pink blue yellow pastel colour socks the whole day. It got night and mom told me to change my socks because I wore the socks the whole day. I tried looking for some new pastel socks but there were only dark colour socks. I decided to wear my dirty pastel socks to sleep. I fell deep asleep and woke up in my dream, there was a small rabbit looking at me. He said hi and said follow me. He hopped along a donut colour pathway but without any icing. I followed him along the pathway.


We walked for hours until we reached a big candy castle. The castle  looked like a cake. At the top I saw a pink blue yellow pastel colour socks. I looked at my feet they had no pastel socks! I asked the rabbit about the castle to get the socks back, he said there are alive carrots who guard the castle we need a disguise. Who’s that big carrot at the top of the castle I asked. The rabbit replied, he is the carrot king he loves pastel things. I said, my socks are pastel! The rabbit said that’s why we are going to get them back for you! The bunny took me back to her cave. We found a  t-shirt with a carrots on it and fluffy pants with carrots on them too. They looked like pyjamas but I wore them anyways. Me and bunny found a beanie in a shape of a carrot and I wore it. I found a small jumpsuit with carrots on them and gave them to rabbit. I gave the mini hat with carrots on them for rabbit to wear. We walked back to the castle. We walked in like nothing happened as 2 carrots were at the door. We looked around and carrots were everywhere. We crept up the stairs. Rabbits hat came off and all carrots stared at rabbit...
I shouted QUICK! Go up the stairs!!! Rabbit and I ran up the stairs as quick as possible! We reached the second floor as the carrots followed us behind. More carrots started chasing after us! Some of them got tired and stopped while the rest followed us to the 10th floor we saw the carrot king. The carrots went back down on the 9th floor just in case We come back down. I saw my socks I was shocked and screamed GIVE BACK MY SOCKS!!! The carrot king said I would put these socks into this green poison and he laughed. I said NO! Rabbit jumped down the balcony and was ready to catch the socks at the bottom of the floor. The carrot king dropped the socks and bunny jumped over the puddle just in time to reach the socks and landed at the other side of the poison. The carrot king laughed and laughed and rabbit shouted HAH how do you feel about this and rabbit showed the socks to the carrot king. I surprisingly ran down the stairs and barged through the carrots. The carrots were sleeping the king looked at the carrots and shouted WELL WHAT ARE YOU DOING GO GET THEM! The carrots woke up and ran down the stairs following me. I reached the door and rabbit had planned something..
Rabbit landed on a big big puddle of thick mud. The carrots slipped into the mud. The king came down and slipped in too. Ge shouted I WILL GET YOU BACK!! Me and carrot ran back to the cave and said well done here are your socks. I said thank you and gave him a big hug. We waved bye and mom was waking me up. I said ugh morning mom. Mom looked at my feet and said did you wear those socks to bed? I said hehe yes I had a dream about carrots and a rabbit. I talked to my family all about the dream. And they all laughed.
THE END

5 comments:

  1. Ka pai Zara, I enjoyed reading this story. I was going to eat a carrot at lunch but now I'm not sure I want to! I like how you used dialogue for your characters. Are you confident using speech marks. Maybe you could try and add them in?

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  2. Hi Zara, I'm impressed to see that you put so much effort and enthusiasm into your writing task today, thanks for sharing it to your blog. The message in your story seems to be to put your socks to wash before going to bed! Remember, when you create a list of adjectives, you need to use commas to separate them.
    Thanks for your creativity. Keep up the awesome work with your blog.

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  3. Hi Zara, wow, what a detailed and interesting story, all beginning with you wearing your blue, pink and yellow socks. Maybe you fell asleep thinking about them and then dreamed a wonderful dream... well I loved reading what you dreamed, but some bits weren't so good for you. Rabbits and carrots chasing you would be a bit scary! Will you ask mum to buy you some more colourful socks? It sounds like you like them so much!!
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us and I look forward to seeing more of your term two learning on your blog.
    Stay safe and well and we will see you when we all start back at school.

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  4. Hi Zara it is me Josie your friend. I really like how you started with a capital letter and a full stop. Well done! Bye friend. My bff.

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  5. good job Zara.

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