Friday 5 November 2021

My morphed animal story!

 Hey bloggers! Today I will be sharing my morphed animal story plan! In writing for the whole week we have been planning a story using animals but their body, legs, head are different! Anyways, let me show u my story and let me know I the comments if my story is good or what I can do to fix something!


Here are my photos of my morphed animal that were used for my story! a kangaroo giraffe, a giraffe rhino and a scary zebra giraffe.     That is the giraffe squirrel down here.






                                         Here is the kangaroo zebra



and the scary giraffe zebra.


Anyways! Let's get on with my story!



There once was a kangaroo zebra that had a long tail and floppy ears. He was friends with a giraffe squirrel that had a very short body but a long neck. One day it was hot and dry and the animals could not find a watering hole so, they split up to find a watering hole. After hours of searching they found a watering hole until they saw a scary zebra giraffe. “May me and my friend share your watering hole?”. “No way!”, said the zebra giraffe”, “What! Why? It's so big you can’t have it all for yourself!” said the kangaroo zebra”. He went back to his friend to tell him what happened. When the friend heard the story he came up with a plan! “I have an idea! It will make him share his watering hole!” said the squirrel giraffe. They grabbed as much food as they can and put in in a pile under their tree. The zebra giraffe set off to find food as he was hungry after drinking water. He looked and looked until he saw the kangaroo zebra and the giraffe squirrel eating a bunch of food. He licked his lips and walked towards them saying “may I share your food stack?” “Hm! No you can’t!” said the kangaroo zebra. “Why?” “because you won’t share your watering hole! “FINE! I’ll share it” “Yay!” said the animals as they all lived as friends.


Hoped you guys liked my story! See you next time bloggers!!


1 comment:

  1. Ata Marie Zara. What creative animals you’ve chosen for your narrative! Yes I did enjoy your story. Your characters are thoughtful and they solved their problem together. Ka pai.
    In line 9, change the word ‘can’ to ‘could’ as it’s in the past tense…They grabbed as much food as they ‘could’ and put it in a pile under the tree. Ok?
    Great use of speech marks, Zara, well done. Add some paragraphs and a new line when a character is speaking. Keep up your awesome mahi. Enjoy a happy weekend with your family.

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